Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Journal Entry # 9

IMAGE ONE :

1. The goverment sends kids off to war at such a young age

2. They can fight for their country but cant have a drink

3. The goverment sends kids off to war bcause they need them but try to protect them from drinking

Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Journal #8

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this image claims that women are ignoratnt to the world and what is goign on. Us in our society we are to consumed with what our problems are and how we need to live our day. We dont really take time to see that our problems of not have the right size shirt in the mall compared to countires that dont have any shirt to wear. This persuades people to think one way about our society being better and not caring for anyone else.

Active Reading 10/23

pg. 371

1. yea i believe that the technique gave me a very good idea of what the article is on because the first paragraph introuduced me to the article and the ending paragrahg closed the whole idea. The middle just closed the details for me and put the picture all together

2. It is important to know that Lightman is a scientist becuase he is coming at a factual back round and he has knowledge on this subject, If he were a artist or a social worker it wouldnt be facutal and it would be based on opinion of that one person. The fact that he is a scientist is very important to the subject matter.

3. Lightman is using a lighthearted tone. In the last paragraph he uses prahes because to show that whta he is saying is true and not forcing it down but to show a differnt perspective.


pg. 385

1. The fact that Gould used evolutionary fact to back up the beliefe in evoultion. He states that the apple falling from the tree and explaining it how newton did. Looking at the world gives us facts that we used the world to get farther in science.

2. Some inferences that gould uses is that he has newton looking at an appple. At this apple he thoughbt of graviattion. With the thought of gravitation he defines it and comes up witht he the law of gravitation.

3. I didnt know about it when he was introuiducing it in the beginigng of the story so i had no idea what he was taking about. Only later into the story i understood what he was saying and talking about it.

Tuesday, October 21, 2008

In The News 10/21

In The News Prompt


1. I believe that the us goverment should not ask each home to pay money but to turn usesless spend dollars in the goverment and use that money to pay of the debt we are in. If this keeps going we are goign to be in serious trouble. The economy should stable out and make prices even and afforable for every one so that akll the profit could stablize the economy.

2. No i do not it tis the goverments fault in putting the american people into debt so they should be the ones to get us out not us paying taxes on top of high taxes we already have to the goverment. they should have thought about this before when are ecnonmy could of been saved. It shouldnt be the people getting the counrty out it should be th goverment who we give our money to.

3. To solve the deficit problem i would stablize the ecnonmny and for a solid couple months make eveything affordable that way all the profits can go toward the economy debt. Then when everyhing and countires are paid off everything can be even and we can start profiting and growing more and more. if we continue to let it sink it will do nothing but hurt us in the end and ruin our counrty.

Monday, October 20, 2008

Yes I Belive Final Draft

Life happens to you in mysteryious ways. Some people go through life never expierencing anything worth talking about. If you never have something come into your life to question who you are or what you believe in then you never know whats inside yourself. Many life changing, and people in my life have made me believe in my strenght as a person. The things you as an individaul believe you can never survive, but end up doing so, you come out of thoes situations a stronger person. During these time of question it is always nice to have somone close to you their and for me that person was my family. They truly showed me that strength is all i need to survive.
Time in life is everything. When your day is busy , the only thing that can make the day go by smootly is correct timing and mental strength. Being a student athlete and an athletic trainer is no joke at all. Just like a mother taking care of kids and managing a job, Crazyness is everywhere. Hours go by without even eating or taking a quick break, it is a fast past crazy life. when i get back from class i have practice and the day i dont have practice i have clinical rotations which i dont end up gettin back to the dorm room until 9 every day. My strenght is the only things that keeps me fighting each day to be the best student athlete and best athletic trainer i can be.
That is just touching on the surface of how i feel with my strength. A life or death situation came ot me a couple of years ago that dug deep inside myslef and made me realize any time i cant do something i really can cause all i need is right inside of me. I was snowboarding and went off a jump and landed wrong this caused me to hit into a tree and laserate my kidney. I had very bad internal bleeding and couldnt move. At that moment i thought my life was over. I knew i had to get up and get help so i crawled on the slope and got someone to call the ski partrol. I was hospitalized for 2 weeks strict bed rest and back home out of school for a month. I knew i had to hold on and get through the hard times because if i were to let this injury get the best of me i would just be a weak person who would never come back the same. Now im back better then ever and i still snowboard and hit that same jump every winter. Think about all the paralyzed people in the world they live above their problem and continue to do the things they love everyday of their lives.
My other strenght in my family. The saying strength in number really does me a lot to me. They taught me that all i need is myself in life. Of course i was young and needed them but as i started growing they showed me toughtness in independance and made me grow on my own and expericence life. I saw how my dad had the strength to accept two kid who are not his , as his own and support them in life as they grow. He works full time so my mother does not have to. He is the man who gives us anything we need and desire. growing up under his wings gave me stgrength to be like him and support my self and any one close to me who needed me. He taught me how to be there for someone when they needed hand. Thats strength to be above yourslef and lend a helping hand.
The question to ask youself is what do you believe in. Wether is family morals or something you learned on the road of life. It is what you believe inside yourself that matters the moth. Without testing youself or who you are you will never know who you are inside. Dont back down when a chanallege comes into your life excpet it and make it life changing. Its not like the president backs down when his country needs him. Know who you are and what you believe in!

Journal Entry 7

In this essay, Orwell suggests that the English language is on the decline because the people who use English are misusing the language. What sort of things does he mention as proof that the English language is in trouble?

A>) The english language is in trouble because people use words that dont fit in sentences to get the point across. People uses prahes in stead of sentences and choppin up the words in the language that is how the english language is in trouble.


Orwell wrote this essay almost 60 years ago. Do you think the English language is in a better or worse condition than when Orwell wrote his essay? Can you think of modern examples of how people misuse language?

A>) It is in worse condition it keeps on getting chopped up worse and worse and now with the text messaging and email there is no use for talk it is alll abbrevaited conversations that dont use real words they are fragmented words that dont make ful understanding sentences.


What do you think of Orwell’s list of rules to improve your writing?

A>) I think that the rules make sence and are good rules to use when you are writting a paper. Who needs to butcher the language anymore when you have time correct and sound proper when useing thr langiage properly in your writting or speaking.




.. When writting and thinking of a picture or a sensation it helps me get my thoughts together and right my paper alll together in one coherient peice. When i dont do that my words and thoughts are all over the page and nothing makes sence. When you sit down all ur thoughts play out and make sence before you wirt them, when you write them sometimes in the middle of the thought your paper or thought trail goes no where and realize the whole thing never made sence in the first place.

Thursday, October 16, 2008

In The News 10/16

Religious Art In Public Places ::

I believe that religion is a form of art is sometimes accepted and not accepted by people of society. the only reason why so many people in oklahoma are pushing for public art is because the majority of the people in that area are probably the same religion. I dont seem them pushing for hindu or muslim art to be public. if art is goign to be accepted and be public it should all forms of relgion. You should represent at last every religion when one goes public all should that is the only way it is fair. Even though it is freedom of speech you shouldnt be able to be bias or subjective to one religion only i understand if you want the cross up but all other religions should be able to put up what they want to. I belive this law is in place because if all religions were to demonstrate out in the public about there god or who they pray to it would be a huge argument. Think about it the law is in place for a reason beacuse there must have been a problem in the past about relgions out in the public.

Project Draft #2

In Relationships you fall in and out of love ::

can you love more then one, somethign that only happen in marrage ~
can you continue to love ~
what does fallin suggest ( nature of it )~
Do relationships need love
Does love need to tagged with marraige




Can You Love More Then One Individual....
In society people relate eternal and complete love to one individual in marraige. But in fact love can spread to more then one person. When you love your parents you dont fall in and out of love with them you continually love them. Same with children a person has. the love for them is different. Its not right to deifne love to only the one you marry. Love is defined and given to people in many ways. not everyone can totally love one person, they love many people close family , and friends.

Can You Continue To Love....
When you end a relationship a daten period with an individual, you still remember them days even years later. For whatever reson why the relationship ended you can still love that one person. Love can be defined as caring and compasion for someone. When your broken up with someone you can still feel compasion and care while being married to another indiviual. Your love is still there with your significant other but love can still be present in your past, that doest mean you dont care for your other its just your love is spread out. Im sure one would never admit but inside we still love something about everyone we meet in that sence we love the things about people that we are not. it makes us who we are that we can appericate people when they come into and out of our lives.

Whats fallin Inlove (( Nature Of Fallin, What It Suggest ))
When people say oh im falling for someone, what does that really mean. I mean to me falling is unintentioal and when you fall to the groudn it hurts. Its is not planned for expected at that time. Its is always happy which is high and sad which is low and down. So why is such a happy time of loving someone put with the down sad word of falling. In movies we see the stars on the screen falling for eachother in this big spectacualr event. this is much how we relate to telling of love stories in our own personal lives. falling has been accopianed with love for ever now and it hasnt been question as something we come to understand.

Do Relationships Need Love....
is it really true that you need love inorder for realtionships to work. You can care and provided for someone every need and not be inlove with that one. A relation works when both have needs are filled by both parties you dont need love. You can have love and the needs not be filled. Love is shown that you need love for somethign to work i mean the realtionship between friends works for the reson because you care for your friend but your not inlove with your friend and that kind of reltionship still works.

Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Project 2

Draft 1 :: In Relationships You Fall In And Out Of Love


When you truly love someone it is a gift to feel so emotional about that one person. You learn so many things about yourself when your in a relationships. Limits get tested and people get broken but by the end of the day everything is worth it. its is why people stay together for so long and why marriage works. there is also an extrem to it. you learn that you dont love that person and a relationship doesnt work. Thats when you have divorce and breakups, its a part of life.
I believe that when you are in a relationship you need to be one hundred precent in it. Love doesnt work when youo dont give it your all. Loving someone is looking at that person everyday in their eyes and feeling the same way every time you do so. It is a strong feeling that wont just wash away easily it takes time to break away from that person. This is why i find it hard ot believe that you can just fall out of love with that person. When you dont love someone what is the point of staying with them to fall back in love with them. That doesnt make sence to just wait around for the old feelings to come back.

When people fall out of love that is when the breakups and divorces come into play. Now the rate for divorce is higher then ever. Its proven that 1 out of 2 marrage fails and ends in break up. Thats understandable because when all is gone why stay in something you cant give your all into. When you stay you end up fighting and thats not fair to the other peopel who is inlove with you when you are not inlove with them. Its sad to see a happy thing end but then again everything ends for a reason and what is ment to be will be in the end.

I know i am young and talking about love and relationships. I believe that i have a good understanding of what i am talking about it. it is more of just putting it together to make sence

active reading pg.233

Active Reading _ Pg. 233
1. Sanders goes out of the way to detail the story so you can get a clear and vivid picture of how to build the wall. Each step is clearly stated like a blue print in your mind. Sanders does not want to leave any questions in peoples minds.

2. Sanders needs chronological to show building blocks for his steps . He brings history into his work as buliding blocks so when you tap back into your memory you can have each step with each past attached to that memory.

3. Dawn stones are the unworked stones that served as hammers in the old times. He uses it in this essay as a example of a great time leap our society has taken. Still having no great distance in design or imagintion.

Thursday, October 2, 2008

Journal 6

Myth

" In relationships you can fall in and out of love "

right now it is describes as a person who can love someone one day and then not love them another day. that is very hard to say is true or not when somone is inlove the are fully in it and when you dont love them your not with that person anymore without love a realtionship does not work to fufill both parites needs.

this myth has changed to people not admitting they r not inlove with that person anymore to finally admitting it. Back then divorce was not accpeted so when you were out of love you still stayed with that one because of kids or family or to be accpeted into socitey. Now a days people are accepting and can leave and divorce as many times as they want. Happyness is now on peopls minds.

beacuse of this our culture has changed. now we dont question love. We dont work anymore towards a goal. when one falls out of love the relationship ends there is no working to build the love back. it is very easy for someone to leave the broken peices on the floor rather than fitting them back together. This quotes will continue to grow and change with the times.